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Tim Wright's avatar

How much Raymond Chandler have you read? Your protagonist's voice sounds a lot like Phillip Marlow in a good way. Thinking of the black sheep of the family, look up Charlie Wall, the White Shadow and Dean of Tampa's underworld. I mentioned him in an article on my Substack.

This is a good hard-boiled story, and I'll wait for the next installment. What else is in the pipeline?

Gigi Vella | Author's avatar

He escaped! This definitely felt bittersweet, knowing that he escaped, and yet the chase will be back on soon enough. I'm excited to read more! I loved your writing during his escape and the cold metal pipe. I could FEEL how frigid it must have been.

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