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Tim Wright's avatar

You got me hooked. The plot is running on all cylinders, and this chapter shows depth in the protagonist with his family: brother, father, mother.

Gigi Vella | Author's avatar

Ooo, the backstory with his brother and parents... that's intriguing! And this line: "I moved against the stream of pedestrians like a salmon looking for a good time." It made me laugh. I really feel like i'm slinking around with him! Awesome writing.

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